2005-09-01 Benjy story - Revision history

Woozle: Notes and title

2005-09-08T00:04:10Z

Notes and title

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			''This story is called....''
			<center><big>'''It's Almost Like the Game "The Fish Game"'''</big></center>

	Once upon a time there lived a guppy. He lived with his mom and dad very happily afterward and he wanted them to help him to get away from aliens that reappear out of nowhere. But one fine day something (inaudible) the crayfish was saying "alien alert! alien alert! alien alert!" told all the little guppies to get into a whale and told all the big guys to get into a lightfish until the alien reappeared! (explosion) and he said "rawwwrr!" It was a shield alien! He was the most hardest to beat. And sooner another one was approaching and the crayfish said "alien alert! alien alert!"... and the alien reappeared! (explosion) and it was the lion alien. They never found a alien like that before. The more aliens were there as before! The meat-eating alien! Soonly (inaudible) spaceships from space were coming, and ka-blam! A lot came out (sound effects) all of them landed and it was Regular Aliens and Shadows and Vorlons and Evil Telepaths! And then (something) the Regular Aliens wanted to fight the (something) to kill the guppies. They said "Wherrre are those '''guppies'''?? And wherrre are those '''big fishes'''?" and (something) they streaked out of the whale -- but sooner, ka-bloosh!! (something) already gone, a lot of guppies and big fish came out of the lightfish.		Once upon a time there lived a guppy. He lived with his mom and dad very happily afterward and he wanted them to help him to get away from aliens that reappear out of nowhere. But one fine day something (inaudible) the crayfish was saying "alien alert! alien alert! alien alert!" told all the little guppies to get into a whale and told all the big guys to get into a lightfish until the alien reappeared! (explosion) and he said "rawwwrr!" It was a shield alien! He was the most hardest to beat. And sooner another one was approaching and the crayfish said "alien alert! alien alert!"... and the alien reappeared! (explosion) and it was the lion alien. They never found a alien like that before. The more aliens were there as before! The meat-eating alien! Soonly (inaudible) spaceships from space were coming, and ka-blam! A lot came out (sound effects) all of them landed and it was Regular Aliens and Shadows and Vorlons and Evil Telepaths! And then (something) the Regular Aliens wanted to fight the (something) to kill the guppies. They said "Wherrre are those '''guppies'''?? And wherrre are those '''big fishes'''?" and (something) they streaked out of the whale -- but sooner, ka-bloosh!! (something) already gone, a lot of guppies and big fish came out of the lightfish.

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	''(We agreed that he could tell me the ten more adventures some other time -- "probably on Saturday.")''		''(We agreed that he could tell me the ten more adventures some other time -- "probably on Saturday.")''

			==Notes==
			This is basically [[wikipedia:Insaniquarium\|Insaniquarium]] [[wikipedia:Fan fiction\|fan-fic]], with a bit of [[wikipedia:Babylon 5\|Babylon 5]] (the Shadows and Vorlons) thrown in.

Woozle: one final Benjy revision

2005-09-01T11:43:35Z

one final Benjy revision

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	''(On hearing this next part read back to him, Benjy said "No, none of the pets died, Only the pets fade or get hurt. ... Only the ones that disappear; those are the regular fish. Some of them were too late." He also said it was the aliens that got killed, so I put that in too and changed it so he was happy with it.)''		''(On hearing this next part read back to him, Benjy said "No, none of the pets died, Only the pets fade or get hurt. ... Only the ones that disappear; those are the regular fish. Some of them were too late." He also said it was the aliens that got killed, so I put that in too and changed it so he was happy with it.)''

	All the aliens shot. First, the aliens were killed. Angie was bringing the pets back to life and the fish back to life. She was the most greatest pet of all, she made them come back to life. But the ones that were too late she didn't get to. Finally, all the pets were freed up, and they took off the dead aliens, and took their weapons away so they could be no problem. Took all the shield aliens' shields to attack them from being killed, and they all had shields on them and... that's THE END! Or maybe it's not. It does more adventures for awhile. ...There is ten more adventures left.		All the aliens shot. First, the aliens were killed. Angie was bringing the pets back to life and the fish back to life, except for the ones that were too late. She was the most greatest pet of all, she made them come back to life. But the ones that were too late she didn't get to. Finally, all the pets were freed up, and they took off the dead aliens, and took their weapons away so they could be no problem. Took all the shield aliens' shields to attack them from being killed, and they all had shields on them and... that's THE END! Or maybe it's not. It does more adventures for awhile. ...There is ten more adventures left.

	''(We agreed that he could tell me the ten more adventures some other time -- "probably on Saturday.")''		''(We agreed that he could tell me the ten more adventures some other time -- "probably on Saturday.")''

Woozle: Benjamin revisions

2005-09-01T11:39:56Z

Benjamin revisions

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	Once upon a time there lived a guppy. He lived with his mom and dad very happily afterward and he wanted them to help him to get away from aliens that reappear out of nowhere. But one fine day something (inaudible) the crayfish was saying "alien alert! alien alert! alien alert!" told all the little guppies to get into a whale and told all the big guys to get into a ~~(something)~~ until the alien reappeared! (explosion) and he said "rawwwrr!" It was a shield alien! He was the most hardest to beat. And sooner another one was approaching and the crayfish said "alien alert! alien alert!"... and the alien reappeared! (explosion) and it was the lion alien. They never found a alien like that before. The more aliens were there as before! The meat-eating alien! Soonly (inaudible) spaceships from space were coming, and ka-blam! A lot came out (sound effects) all of them landed and it was Regular Aliens and Shadows and ~~(something)~~ and Evil Telepaths! And then (something) the Regular Aliens wanted to fight the (something) to kill the guppies. They said "Wherrre are those guppies?? And wherrre are those big fishes?" and (something) they streaked out of the whale -- but sooner, ka-bloosh!! (something) already gone, a lot of guppies and big fish ~~(something)~~.		Once upon a time there lived a guppy. He lived with his mom and dad very happily afterward and he wanted them to help him to get away from aliens that reappear out of nowhere. But one fine day something (inaudible) the crayfish was saying "alien alert! alien alert! alien alert!" told all the little guppies to get into a whale and told all the big guys to get into a lightfish until the alien reappeared! (explosion) and he said "rawwwrr!" It was a shield alien! He was the most hardest to beat. And sooner another one was approaching and the crayfish said "alien alert! alien alert!"... and the alien reappeared! (explosion) and it was the lion alien. They never found a alien like that before. The more aliens were there as before! The meat-eating alien! Soonly (inaudible) spaceships from space were coming, and ka-blam! A lot came out (sound effects) all of them landed and it was Regular Aliens and Shadows and Vorlons and Evil Telepaths! And then (something) the Regular Aliens wanted to fight the (something) to kill the guppies. They said "Wherrre are those '''guppies'''?? And wherrre are those '''big fishes'''?" and (something) they streaked out of the whale -- but sooner, ka-bloosh!! (something) already gone, a lot of guppies and big fish came out of the lightfish.

	When all that squeaking came out all the time with rushing out, all the fishes ran out! And they all went to attack, and plblehblhebleh! ~~Benjy~~ was bringing them back to life, except for the ones that were already doing it too late. (lots of sound effects and one "attaaaack!")		When all that squeaking came out all the time with rushing out, all the fishes ran out! And they all went to attack, and plblehblhebleh! Angie was bringing them back to life, except for the ones that were already doing it too late. (lots of sound effects and one "attaaaack!")

	All the aliens shot. First, the ~~(something)~~ were killed ~~(something)~~ Angie was bringing ~~them~~ back to life. She was the most greatest pet of all, she made them come back to life. But the ones that were too late she didn't get to. Finally, all the pets were freed up, and they took off the dead aliens, and took their weapons away so they could be no problem. Took all the shield aliens' ~~(something)~~ to attack them from being killed, and they all had shields on ~~(something)~~ and... that's THE END! Or maybe it's not. It does more adventures for awhile.		''(On hearing this next part read back to him, Benjy said "No, none of the pets died, Only the pets fade or get hurt. ... Only the ones that disappear; those are the regular fish. Some of them were too late." He also said it was the aliens that got killed, so I put that in too and changed it so he was happy with it.)''

			All the aliens shot. First, the aliens were killed. Angie was bringing the pets back to life and the fish back to life. She was the most greatest pet of all, she made them come back to life. But the ones that were too late she didn't get to. Finally, all the pets were freed up, and they took off the dead aliens, and took their weapons away so they could be no problem. Took all the shield aliens' shields to attack them from being killed, and they all had shields on them and... that's THE END! Or maybe it's not. It does more adventures for awhile. ...There is ten more adventures left.

			''(We agreed that he could tell me the ten more adventures some other time -- "probably on Saturday.")''

Woozle at 11:22, 1 September 2005

2005-09-01T11:22:09Z

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[[Category:Benjy]]
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Once upon a time there lived a guppy. He lived with his mom and dad very happily afterward and he wanted them to help him to get away from aliens that reappear out of nowhere. But one fine day something (inaudible) the crayfish was saying "alien alert! alien alert! alien alert!" told all the little guppies to get into a whale and told all the big guys to get into a (something) until the alien reappeared! (explosion) and he said "rawwwrr!" It was a shield alien! He was the most hardest to beat. And sooner another one was approaching and the crayfish said "alien alert! alien alert!"... and the alien reappeared! (explosion) and it was the lion alien. They never found a alien like that before. The more aliens were there as before! The meat-eating alien! Soonly (inaudible) spaceships from space were coming, and ka-blam! A lot came out (sound effects) all of them landed and it was Regular Aliens and Shadows and (something) and Evil Telepaths! And then (something) the Regular Aliens wanted to fight the (something) to kill the guppies. They said "Wherrre are those *guppies*?? And wherrre are those big *fishes*?" and (something) they streaked out of the whale -- but sooner, *ka-bloosh!!* (something) already gone, a lot of guppies and big fish (something).

When all that squeaking came out all the time with rushing out, all the fishes ran out! And they all went to attack, and plblehblhebleh! Benjy was bringing them back to life, except for the ones that were already doing it too late. (lots of sound effects and one "attaaaack!")

All the aliens shot. First, the (something) were killed (something) Angie was bringing them back to life. She was the most greatest pet of all, she made them come back to life. But the ones that were too late she didn't get to. Finally, all the pets were freed up, and they took off the dead aliens, and took their weapons away so they could be no problem. Took all the shield aliens' (something) to attack them from being killed, and they all had shields on (something) and... that's THE END! Or maybe it's not. It does more adventures for awhile.